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Sally’s Cafe and Bookstore – New Book on the Shelves -#Childrens – Space Dust by Eloise De Sousa

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Monday Coffee

Thanks for meeting me here at the coffee house. I’m sorry it has been so many weeks since we last had a coffee catch up. Let’s get our beverages, find our favourite yellow sofa next to the book shelves filled books and I’ll tell you what I’ve been up to.

Image result for school gifSince we last met, the school term kicked off to a speedy start, which cut down my writing time to just two days a week again. It was great to see the new little faces of the Reception class – some of them are only just four years old! My intervention groups have changed this term with a focus on the early years and one of the junior classes. That means a more concentrated effort on those struggling students and more time for me to help them along before the half term.

Have you changed your schedule since the new term has started, or does school life not affect you any more? What have you been up to for the past few weeks?

As I sip my black coffee and nibble at a ginger nut biscuit, I have to share an exciting project which I hope will take off in the future. I’ve started putting together a package for my Author Enrichments which can be run in any school to help enhance literacy programmes already pre-existing within the classes. Once that is up and running, I will be able to use my writing and specialist literacy skills to provide author visits with a difference. Would you like an author visit that provides more than just an interesting talk and a story? Let me know what you think.

There’s more news about Space Dust. It’s going on tour! I’m still preparing the write ups for different blogs that have kindly agreed to host me from the end of September through to October. Each stop will provide an original post with interesting takes on how the book came to fruition, author interviews and character reveals.

20190916_110201000_iOSI’ll be giving a sneak preview of the sequel to the book and, at the end of October, Space Dust will be accompanying me to the October Literary Festival! Joining the likes of Fiona Barker, a panel of children’s authors will discuss the joys and heartbreak of writing children’s books.

20190916_110217000_iOSI will also be holding my own Book Corner work shop at one of the local libraries. All the characters from my books will be getting involved in craft sessions and activities to entertain and enthrall readers of any age. Don’t worry if you can’t attend. There will be live updates and videos right here and on my author website, so you won’t miss out!

The ginger nut biscuits are finished and so is my coffee which means it’s nearly time for me to go back to the grindstone and finish off those write ups. Once the tour is ready to rumble, I will send out the links to the pages participating in the tour so that you don’t miss anything. Send in your questions and comments on all that you see and like. Let me know if you’re enjoying the tour and what’s your favourite reveal.

Don’t forget to order your copy of Space Dust and leave your pics and reviews on my page or on amazon so that others can share in your enjoyment of the book.

Have a great week!



Another One Bites the Dust!

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Catch Up Coffee

Monday has been devoured by time lords and I am desperately clawing away time to catch up with you before the week disappears. Grab your beverage and let’s meet at the yellow sofa for a quick catch up. Continue reading

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Applying Psychology to Optimizing Landing Pages

Christmas is coming and the optimum time to start sending out your Christmas sales mailshots to prospective readers is long overdue. But, landing that sale is never easy. Most of the expert sites seem to have an inside lane on how to attract interest to their landing pages (sales pages) and how to get readers to purchase from their landing page. They make it look effortless to catch that elusive reading fish searching for a bargain. How on earth do the rest of us keep up?

As a digital marketer, you know that landing pages are essential for creating great first impressions and generating leads for each marketing campaign. But simply creating a landing page with a gated offer is not enough for your campaign to be successful.

To help create the most basic landing page with a lot of selling appeal, Campaign Monitor, an email marketing platform provider, shares blogger, Brandon Weaver’s break down on the simple psychology used when planning your landing page. He gives an easy-to-follow check list of things to look out for when adding items to your site and the value of including trust indicators to make your customers feel safe.

Landing page design goes much deeper than making your pages look pretty and easy to navigate. You must know what makes visitors take action and what makes them abandon your page. This is where understanding landing page psychologycan be the difference in winning a conversion or losing the prospect forever.

In today’s post, we’ll look at how to design an optimized landing page and how to apply a few psychological principles that are proven to convince visitors to take action.

How to apply psychology and design an optimized landing page

Create a compelling headline to draw visitors in

To capture visitors’ attention immediately and keep them engaged on your page long enough to evaluate your offer, you need a compelling headline. Speak directly to the benefits of your product or service and how it fulfills an essential need for your prospect.

One technique to use is the focusing effect.

The focusing effect is the tendency of people to place too much emphasis on one thing at the expense of others. When it comes to your landing page headline, though, you can use this to your advantage.

Your product or service likely has many benefits, but highlighting your unique value proposition (UVP) in your headline helps prospects focus strongly on that one feature. In turn, your UVP encourages them to click your CTA button.

JumpCrew lists several of its benefits in the copy, but highlights its UVP (more customers for less money) in the headline to grab visitors’ attention and make them hungry for more information:

JumpCrew - Compelling Headline - Unique Value Proposition

Another way to craft a compelling headline is via message matching. Message matching provides a consistent message from ad to landing page to make prospects more comfortable in converting on your landing page offer. It is most common in headlines, but it can also be demonstrated through images, copy, and colors.

Getting your prospective visitors to notice your message is all well and good, but keeping them on your page is what turns them into serious customers. Adding interesting and relevant content will entice your visitor to explore your page and seems pretty obvious, but there is more you can do to add interest. 

Include engaging media to keep visitors engaged

In the list of landing page best practices, video and images both play a critical role in persuading visitors to take action. For example, on average, a visitor will stay on a web page with video (5 minutes and 50 seconds) longer versus a page with only text and images (43 seconds). So it’s no surprise that videos have proven to increase conversion rates by as much as 80%.

Landing page images often employ the “deictic gaze” — a visual cue to draw the viewer’s attention toward an intended object. The most common example of this is a person looking towards the CTA button, drawing the visitor’s attention to it so they click it.

Take a look at this page, and notice where your attention goes:

Campaign Monitor – Landing Page CTA Button

Adding a video relevant to your product may not have been your first choice for engaging a new audience, but it could be an easy way to add interest to your product.

Moving on from the visual aids, Brandon breaks down the impact of content. What could be breaking news on a new book or your ‘must have’ Christmas offer may be derailed by content that falls flat on its face. How do you stop this from happening?

Write ultra persuasive copy

Not only should your copy be readable, it should also be easy to understand. Stay away from jargon and write in a way that a 6th grader would understand. For example, if your solution saves people money, don’t say “closefisted.” Instead, say cost-effective.

Also, loss aversion can be an effective psychological tactic. It’s based on the idea that people value not losing something more than gaining something. So telling your prospects what they’ll be losing if they don’t convert is a surefire way to get them to take action — especially when you combine this with a free offer.

Take a look how Webinfinity applies loss aversion to their landing page copy with their headline and first section header. First, they ask visitors if they’re losing the PRM technology game. Then, they tell visitors they’re losing the game if they’re still using older technology:

Webinfinity - Landing Page Copy

Now that you have your visitor’s attention and they are there to stop and browse for a while, do you convert them into customers that buy or keep them entertained by the visuals and content? What is required to set the right tone to create a reaction to the smorgasbord you’ve prepared?

Urgency is another effective strategy to incorporate in your landing page copy. By letting prospects know they must act quickly to redeem the offer, you’re persuading them to convert. This is often done in conjunction with a countdown timer, like a webinar landing page or event registration page.

Next is the decoy effect. It involves at least three choices packaged smartly together using persuasive copy to convince prospects to select the option you want them to choose. Sales pages (like a pricing page) in particular use this tactic in which adding a decoy option (a third option) to a set of original options tends to increase the prospect’s preference for one option over the other original option. Meaning, one option is inferior to another, but in the middle ground compared to the least favorable option.

Here’s how The New Yorker uses the decoy effect on their subscription landing page. By adding the best value option — both print and digital subscription for the same price as just either one by itself — it makes choosing that one a no-brainer:

The New Yorker - Subscription Landing Page
Whilst finding the perfect balance between the tone of the copy, highlighting  headings to match your mail shot and creating images to keep your prospective customer on your page, we can’t forget the importance of balance:

Utilize white space to focus their attention

White space and various color combinations are great for providing visitors with a pleasing visual experience, but they also play a vital role in persuading visitors to click your CTA button.

White space (aka empty space) helps isolate certain elements on your landing page, like forms and CTA buttons, so they can draw maximum attention. By surrounding important elements with white space, you effectively tell visitors what you want them to focus on.

When it comes to color, consider the Von Restorff Effect, which states that people tend to remember things that stand out to them most. With landing pages design your CTA button in a contrasting color (preferably a color that hasn’t been used anywhere) so it’s very obvious where they must go to redeem your offer. If you’re unsure of which color to choose, look at the color wheel and choose the opposite color of your page’s dominant color. For example, if your page is mostly blue, select orange for the CTA button.

Look how Five9 surrounded their CTA button and video with white space and designed it in a contrasting color to make it “pop” off the page:

Five9 – CTA Button – White Space & Color Combinations

The value of good colour and balance can never be underestimated. It took me many tries to get a colour combination for my author page that appealed to my readers and I’m still not certain I have it right.  After the examples given, even a novice like myself can make the necessary changes to tweak my landing page and make it more attractive for the most wary customer. We cannot forget though, that our pages are not the only ones out there trying to sell their wares. What makes a landing page stand out against the competition when encouraging prospective buyers that it will fulfill their order requests?

Add trust indicators to make visitors feel safe

Maslow’s Hierarchy of Needs teaches us that one of the most basic human needs is safety. When marketers don’t apply safety elements to landing pages to instill trust, it’s easy to understand why they abandon the page: they don’t feel safe and secure providing their personal information.

Trust indicators come in many forms: customer badges or testimonials, awards, industry ratings, and a privacy policy link. All of these can help make prospects feel confident enough to convert on your offer, or at least stay on your page long enough to consider it.

Social proof is one of the best ways to gain prospect’s trust. Displaying customer testimonials and prominent publications that your brand has been featured establishes credibility for your offer. It makes people more comfortable knowing other people trust you.

Here is a Highfive landing page that incorporates both a customer testimonial and industry ratings to make prospects feel safe:

Highfive - Customer Testimonials and Industry Ratings

Right, we have the customer on our landing page and they have made the decision to purchase a book or product – what do we do next to make sure they follow through with a positive action?

Design an attractive form and CTA button to seal the deal

The lead capture form and CTA button are the two most important elements for conversions. After all, the form collects leads’ information and clicking the CTA button is how a prospect finalizes their conversion.

Since these are the most important elements on your page, they need to stand out.

Encapsulation, or creating an enclosed window of focus, is a great way to highlight your form and draw attention to it. You can do this with outlines and/or contrasting colors.

Freshsales encapsulates their lead capture form using white:

Freshsales - Lead Capture Form & CTA Button

Getting the form noticed is one thing. Convincing prospects to take further action takes more than a noticeable form. That’s where CTA copy comes into play.

Instead of using vague words like “Download,” “Submit,” or “Register,” being specific and emphasizing the benefits of your offer is more likely to boost conversions. Notice how Healthcare Software Hub crafted their CTA copy to be specific and action-oriented:

Healthcare Software Hub – Call to Action – CTA Copy

Wrap up

Simply creating a landing page and generating traffic to it is not sufficient to increase your conversions. You must design the page with the right elements while implementing some psychological principles. Only then will your visitors be persuaded to take action and your marketing funnel start to collect more and more leads.

A huge thank you to Campaign Monitor for sharing Brandon Weaver’s blog. If you would like further information on an easy email marketing platform your blog page or author site, visit Campaign Monitor for some great advice, tips and products. 

Thanks for reading.


Monday Coffee

Thanks for joining me at the virtual coffee house! It’s great to see you after such a long time. Grab your coffee and let’s get settled on the big yellow sofa in the corner near the fire. It’s chilly again tonight and the threat of rain is imminent, as always. Continue reading

Monday Coffee

Hello. It’s wonderful to see you again and I’m so glad you made it. I need your help.

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Monday Coffee

It’s black coffee night for me. After a long, exciting day I need to relax next to you and detox. Come, join me on the yellow chair near the bookshelf and stage.  The coffee house is empty this week – I blame it on the sudden good weather or the fact that most bloggers are in the midst of great projects.

img_2348The day started relatively well with my daughter’s birthday cake turning out pretty good.
She was so pleased with it, she decided to take photos of the cake which made me feel very proud of my efforts. You see, I haven’t baked in quite a long time and this was the first cake I’ve made in about one or two years. So, yup, pleased with my effort!


Image result for images of horrified womanOnce the morning run was done, I sped home to power clean the stinky hole we call a home and throw it back into a civilised state after a weekend of vegging. Unfortunately, in my rush, I assumed the sprogs had cleaned their rooms, knowing that I had threatened them that we were going to have a person come round to give us a quote on some work.  To my horror, I led said gent up the stairs to take a look at the bedrooms and lo and behold the most embarrassing sight met my eyes.  I won’t go into any detail out of pure shame, but let’s just say I had to apologise for the state of the sprogs’ bedrooms.  He just smiled and assured me that he hadnt noticed anything. Well, I did and I bet a blind man would have sensed something was wrong with their bedrooms (probably after tripping over toys and dirty clothing strewn across the carpets). I was mortified.

41fctha3vql-_uy250_Once the gent had left, I settled back down to work on my book and made good progress. I’ve had to link different chapters so that they make more sense to the main story and added extra detail for some of the characters. Compared to The Iron Pendulum, The Pink Mask will give more depth to the characters and their back stories.  I’m just hoping that after sending out more copies to the ether, some of my readers will leave a review of the book. It’s frustrating waiting for feedback, any feedback, on whether the book is good or not. So, with a not-so-gentle shove, please leave your reviews on my books. I would appreciate it so much and I do want to hear from you.

I’ve targeted more literary agents and have sent out more letters of hope. Oh, the life of a writer! We lead such glorious lives. Sometimes I feel like a character in a Shakespearean tragedy: awaiting my love  to come save me but due to the idle meddling of associates, tragedy looms closer as love seems to drift further away!

On a positive note, I have a child who is a year older, our adventures as a family are continuing this year and I have a good idea who is going to get murdered in my next book!

So, with that in mind, give me the skinny on your weekend and what plans you have for the week.

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