THE FAR AWAY LAND
reaching out –
hair in a breeze,
holding onto cliffs,
their jagged angles like
shards of glass, all broken and
sprinkled with hot ice that can burn
exposed shivering fingers and toes;
where whispering winds steal my breath away.
Copyright held by ©Eloise De Sousa (2020)
Posted in Poetry, Weekly Trail, Wensfriesday
Tagged #writersclub, blogging, blogs, education, etheree, inspiration, poems, poetry, poets
It’s the mid-week treat. With snow descending on the UK, gloomy days and freezing temperatures are bringing optimism down. So, to brighten your day, here’s a song to keep you going. For those who watch The Walking Dead, you’ll get it!
Have a great day!
Every Friday afternoon, my Writer’s Club meet to share our latest work, new ideas and, of course, complete the flash fiction and haiku challenge of the day. All this is done in half an hour. But, one of the first questions I ask when a story is discussed or an idea is framed for peer discussion is: what’s the hook?
Books flow in abundance from adults willing to share their lives or create escapes for others to enjoy. The purpose of these writings, the hook, is vitally important for any child to grasp if they want to become good writers. I can correct their grammar and spelling or focus on punctuation till I’m blue in the face. Alas, it doesn’t make their stories any more interesting if they don’t have a hook, a purpose.
Through so many sites, companies, self-help books and other paraphernalia, we are taught the winning structure for getting our written word published – the how-to and what-not-to-do. In school, we focus more on getting the children to write legible sentences that fulfill the protocols set by government standards (which never stay the same). While some children sail through and grasp the concepts thrown at them with ease, others struggle and need a change of tack to get them to enjoy learning about grammatically correct sentences that mean absolutely nothing to them in the scheme of things. But, imagine if, just for a change, we focus on their enjoyment of the task. Imagine if we motivate them to find what’s missing from their work and to add it in all on their own.
That’s my purpose. I find the key to turn the engine to get the child motivated enough to find the missing link. Sometimes it works, sometimes it does not. That doesn’t mean I give up trying different ways, nor does it mean I ever think a child is a failure or incapable of improvement. It’s thinking outside the proverbial box of education and finding that spark to ignite the young minds to infuse their work with their personalities; to find the hook. I aim to enhance their skills as writers and become something that won’t tick all the boxes immediately, but will send them off with a confidence to learn more and achieve something greater than just a good grade: self belief.
So, the next time you enter a classroom or run your intervention groups, think of that exceptional child in the corner looking at you with his or her chin held in defiance to learning…and smile. You are the seer, the oracle. Give that child the key to unlock the knowledge trapped inside and set his or her mind free. After all, what’s the hook to this tale?
Posted in Weekly Trail, Wensfriesday
Tagged blogging, blogs, children, learning, literacy, school, support, teachers, teaching, writing
Hi and welcome to my entry for Sacha’s Writespiration 2017.
2017 brings 52 challenges over 52 weeks.
Your challenge is to write your story using the weekly theme/prompt and write it in just 52 words…. EXACTLY, no more, no less.
Submit your entries in the comments or on a blog post and I post them the following week with the new prompt. You have until Sunday to enter.
This week I want you to:
Write about the girl that wore the black hood.
Here is my entry:
Rage coursed through her black hooded body, heralding the return of emotions.
“I’m still alive,” she whispered, barely audible for Tom and her sister to hear. “You buried me alive.”
Their intertwined lips and bodies crushed out rational thought – their turn to burn for lies. Carefully raising her hoodie, her eyes flamed.
Here’s a little happy for your mid-week break.
Picture this: soft, grey clouds pouting in the sky, blotting out the blue. Does that make you feel miserable? Well, imagine a nice cup of something hot in your hand and a view of the forest, the park, a bustling street in the city – anything to brighten your dreary day. Imagine a huge hug wrapping you up in a warm, snuggly embrace and a whisper in your ear saying, “You are important to me!”
There. Hope your day is awesome and if you feel like reaching out, drop me a message. Sending you all hugs today.
PS. I’m linking you to my blogging pal Trent’s Weekly Smile. Send him a message on what makes you smile this week. Thanks.
My apologies for my erratic posts on such an important day of the week. If you miss my #Wensfriesday commentary, jump over to Twitter and find me there. I usually post something fun to acknowledge of mid-week Friday break. My handle is @mello_elo.
Now my lovely daughter came home today and shared a fantastic YouTube video by Weird Al Yankovic (the same guy that made Michael Jackson’s, I’m Bad, cool!). Here it is…
Have an awesome day! 😀
Posted in Weekly Trail, Wensfriesday
Tagged blogging, blogs, break, fun, humour, mid-week, twitter, video, wensfriesday, youtube