It has been a while since I’ve participated in Ronovan’s haiku challenge. What a great way to celebrate poetry.
Here is my attempt for the challenge words Air and Lantern:
Shapeless serpent breathes,
Blowing hope, up and away –
Lighting the darkness.
If you’d like to try your hand at a haiku, here are Ronovan’s helpful tips:
Have a go.
As a special feature, I thought it might be fun, to create a quick ditty for Big Ox and Little One!
Floating free on the rainbow trail
Big Ox and Little one prepared to set sail
Across the sky on a mission to see
Cheesy Dust and maybe a pepper pot tree.
Using his absolute favourite spoon
Big Ox propelled the boat in the direction of the moon.
“Will we see Mummy today?”
“I don’t see why not. She mentioned needing extra cheese and pepper for her spots.”
“Don’t be silly,” replied Little One, grinning at the joke. “I really want to wave hello, not make silly pokes.”
Happy National Poetry Day!
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Foraging for the purpose, the point
of our desire. Quenched so quickly,
Yes, the yearning holds more fire.
Such heat! Doesn’t it defeat the purpose,
The target, the goal of consummation? Sweet soul eaten like dessert, no hesitation.
A dire, empty bowl scraped – now inert. Serene is the tongue holding that lingering flavour.
Is it the yearning or consumed desire we savour?
This poem woke me up and wouldn’t leave me alone. The rhythm feels slightly off towards the last line but it insists it’s following the pattern of lilting and drifting, rhyming within to produce sound and feeling.
Let me know what you think.
The house is still, no sounds to wake
The two-legged oafs
Who cried and moaned and quaked,
When sleeping is all the effort I’ll ever make.
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Have you hear of a Haiga? Colleen explains it expertly. It’s defini something I will try with my young writers in Writers Club.
Colleen M. Chesebro
Since so many poets are inspired by photos, drawings, paintings, or other images when they compose their poetry, I wanted to add the “
Haiga,” a dramatic poetic form to my weekly syllabic poetry challenge starting the first week of February 2019. So, for the new challenge posted on 2/5/19, this will be another acceptable form for our syllabic challenge.
Haiga is sometimes called observational poetry because it contains an image with either a haiku or senryu written on it or near it.
Youtube: Traditional Japanese Art – Haiga – Japanese Paintings with Haiku poems by Doshin Kuba
This one form combines three artforms: imagery (photographs or original art), poetry, and calligraphy.
ahapoetry.com shares this about the Haiga:
“Haiga is a Japanese concept for simple pictures combined with poetry, usually meaning haiku. In Basho’s time,
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This is a poem I wrote the year my mum passed away. Even though Christmas has passed, I thought I would share it again as a special tribute to her, my little bird!
I tried to forget you yesterday
Pretended the day wasn’t about you
No celebration, no memorial or tasteful display
Just a drink and a quick prayer to chase out blues
Now the clock is ticking
Santa is drawing near
We’ve put up your Christmas decoration
Since you won’t be here
No struggling, cursing, crying
To get you through the door
And the happy sense of achievement
When your wheels touch the kitchen floor
We won’t choose the meal together
Since last year’s meal was your last
No fighting over whose house to visit
Now that you’re in the past
I’m going to try not to miss you
When I don’t see you sitting there
Children reaching to open their presents
They’ve kept back, so that moment, with you, they could share
Every minute of Christmas this year
Will breathe in for a new tradition
As you, dear Mum won’t be there
Since you’ve taken a life-long intermission.
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Threads dispersed, tendrils drifting,
Cross stitches holding my heart together
Fragile grips for forever
Like kisses on a broken organ.
Undisclosed attachments to materialistic grips
Patterned designs meant for purpose
But, oh, giving me goose bumps of joy
As I blanket stitch them together.
Expressing my toxic insides
Filtering them with padding
Slip stitch my lips so nothing escapes;
Shh! Here comes the blunt truth…
Nothing can hold back the black and white
No shade. Backstitch that bad stuff,
But the running stitch won’t erase it.
The stark truth prevails like a blind stitch.
Consume my physical receptacle
Pool your passion as you will
Favour the inevitable
As I swallow the bitter pill
Of realising your incompetence
Of being more than a physical presence
Leave me yearning for more substance
In my search for a soulmate’s essence.