The Far Away Land

Posted on April 15, 2020 | 10 Comments

THE FAR AWAY LAND

 

Strands

floating,

reaching out –

hair in a breeze,

holding onto cliffs,

their jagged angles like

shards of glass, all broken and

sprinkled with hot ice that can burn

exposed shivering fingers and toes;

where whispering winds steal my breath away.

 

 

Copyright held by ©Eloise De Sousa (2020)

 

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10 responses to “The Far Away Land”

  1. robbiesinspiration | April 15, 2020 at 4:38 pm | Reply

    This is a lovely poem, Eloise.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Jacquie Biggar | April 15, 2020 at 5:16 pm | Reply

    This is beautiful! I’ve been through many winters that cold, lol

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Natalie Ducey | April 16, 2020 at 2:54 pm | Reply

    Beautiful, Eloise. Thanks for sharing! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Vashti Q | April 16, 2020 at 10:24 pm | Reply

    Beautiful poem, Eloise! It’s filled with amazing imagery. Well done. 😀 xo

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Teagan R. Geneviene | May 5, 2020 at 1:36 pm | Reply

    And this took *my* breath away. How evocative! Mello, you brought out so many sensations and feelings with so few words. Beautifully done. Hugs on the wing.

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