The Far Away Land





reaching out –

hair in a breeze,

holding onto cliffs,

their jagged angles like

shards of glass, all broken and

sprinkled with hot ice that can burn

exposed shivering fingers and toes;

where whispering winds steal my breath away.



Copyright held by ©Eloise De Sousa (2020)


10 responses to “The Far Away Land

  1. This is a lovely poem, Eloise.

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  2. This is beautiful! I’ve been through many winters that cold, lol

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  3. Beautiful, Eloise. Thanks for sharing! 🙂

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  4. Beautiful poem, Eloise! It’s filled with amazing imagery. Well done. 😀 xo

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  5. And this took *my* breath away. How evocative! Mello, you brought out so many sensations and feelings with so few words. Beautifully done. Hugs on the wing.

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